Tuesday, February 10, 2015

Character Development Assignment




Backstory

Yin

Yin grew up in a small plantation village and although she never had the chance to meet her parents, she was lucky to have one of the best samurai in the country take her under his wing. As she grew, she was able to learn and master the art of swordsmanship alongside her master, and her respect towards him grew exponentially over the years.
To her disappointment, she later finds out that her master is a dangerous criminal who seeks to gain control of the country. However, she knows her skill alone will not be enough to defeat her wise and powerful master. For this reason, she sets on a journey to find a legendary magical katana that will grant the user the power of the heroes that have held it in the past.

Kami

Kami is the only daughter of the richest family in town. She is an overconfident, energetic girl that enjoys passing the time reading tales of adventures from her parents’ library. These tales inspired in her a passion for adventure, and so she ran away from home to seek adventures outside of her palace. Although she is quite new to this new world, she manages to quickly conquer it.
 She has a dark side to her that is hidden behind her sweet smile. Kami’s bratty nature never fails to get her into all sorts of trouble. In order to make it by herself in the streets, she lies and steals from others, and it is through an act of mischief that she meets Yin, in who she sees the perfect opportunity to have the adventure she has always wanted.

Attributes:

Yin
·         Quiet
·         Serious
·         Kindhearted
·         A recluse
·         Skillful
·         No social skills
·         Analytical
·         Thoughtful
·         Laid-back
·         Just
·         Short tempered
·         Determined
·         Low energy

Kami

·         Annoying
·         Rule breaker
·         Sweet
·         Mischievous
·         Bratty
·         Schemer
·         Flamboyant
·         Dreamer
·         Curious
·         Energetic
·         Excited
·         Motivated
·         Reckless
·         Clumsy
·         Playful

Tollbooth Scenario:

As Kami and Yin arrive at the toll booth, Yin is feeling relieved that she won’t be listening to Kami’s pointless conversations for much longer. They finally stop and Yin searches through her pockets for change to pay the toll, however she finds that the money has gone missing. At first she is puzzled by the disappearance of the money but, after a moment of realization, she turns to look at Kami, who simply grins back. Yin looks at her suspiciously, but realizes that if Kami has gotten her hands on the money, there was no way of getting it back from her. While Yin thinks about what to do next, Kami pressures her into coming up with a solution for their problem. Soon after, more cars start lining up behind Yin. The sound of Kami’s ranting and the cars’ incessant honking eventually become too overwhelming and she yells at Kami, demanding her to shut up. Kami looks back at her with a daring look, and proceeds to get off the car. Yin looks at her puzzled and notices that Kami is leaving her behind. Kami looks back, grins, and waves goodbye to Yin. Yin lets out a sigh of frustration, rolls her eyes, and puts her head on the wheel, and comes to the realization that she’d rather not deal with what she considers a petty problem and decides to turn back and wait for Kami’s return, but not before apologizing to everyone waiting for her to pay at the tollbooth.


1 comment:

  1. Backstory Yin: Not enough information - why doesn’t she know her parents and why did the Samurai care for her? Did he adopt her? How does this affect her??? What is her life like? It seems odd that a criminal is so caring and that she would turn against them. The potential conflict is interesting, but I don’t believe in these people, yet.
    Backstory Kami: Need more info!!!! How is it she is able to “quickly conquer” this new world? She seems very unlikable – why do she and Yin connect?
    The attribute lists both provide a good start, but could do to be developed.
    Tollbooth: Describe what is happening – you are skipping over the details. Make the story come alive for the reader. Get into your character’s head(s)! Not a very clear solution and does not speak clearly about the characters.

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