In the streets of a small town, Kami is running away from a
huge and menacing gangster. In her attempt to escape from the clutches of this
man, she runs into Yin, a mysterious samurai who proceeds to defend her from
the man. She threatens the man with her sword and the man defensively lets her
know that Kami has stolen from him. Yin, angry at Kami now, makes her give back
the money she has stolen. The man leaves, and as Yin starts to leave too she
notices that Kami is following her. After much struggle, she finally manages to
make Kami leave. As Kami leaves, Yin is attacked by surprise by the gangster,
after he had realized that the money inside his money bag had been replaced by
metal pieces. Yin is unable to fight back, but Kami hurries back to her aid and
manages to distract the gangster with her clumsy attacks long enough for Yin to
make an escape and defeat him. Thankful for saving her, Yin decides to teach
Kami how to wield a sword.
Dialogue is a ‘no-no’. The story must be told visually! I do not understand the events you describe or the relationships between these people. Keep your story simple and create a logic that your audience can follow.
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